Friday, July 05, 2013

The Writer

Hey look! It's me!
Not happy with the guy's face in the last panel. If it's going to break the panel edge, it should have been much bigger - and therefore NEEED to break the panel.
Going to have to work on "imposing".

And the female has the same pose in the last two panels, but they're supposed to be different things - hand on chin thinking, and then hand in front of mouth, whispering. I have much to learn.

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